by Ace » 03 Jul 2016, 04:35
Inside7shadows wrote:By "research", I don't even Remember the choices for voices like 1st person or 3rd person omniscient.
First Person: "I was walking to the store, beginning to think about how horny I've been, when a beautiful lady came around the corner, walking towards me. I smiled as we both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, and we took a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, I said 'After you, Miss,' before she walked slowly past me. I turned around, confused as to why she didn't enter, to her strutting her body behind me. She teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling me to follow with the hand behind her back. However, that was before it gently lifted her skirt just enough to flash her pair of black panties at me. I smiled, following her to her car as I realized that she was the answer to my prayers..."
Second Person: "You were walking to the store, when I walked around the corner. I had decided that you were mine from the very moment I saw your cute face and adorable haircut, but I did little to show my excitement as we both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, taking a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, you said 'After you, Miss,' before I decided to tease you by walking slowly past you. You turned around, confused as to why I didn't enter, while I just strutted my body behind you. I teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling you to follow me by using the hand behind my back. However, that was before I gently lifted my skirt just enough to give you a glance of black panties. I smirked away from your view, knowing that you had no idea about what you were getting yourself into..."
Third Person UNLIMITED OMNISCIENCE: "He was walking to the store, beginning to think about how horny he's been, when a beautiful lady came around the corner, walking towards him. She had decided that he was hers from the very moment she saw his cute face and adorable haircut, but she did little to show her excitement. He smiled as they both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, and they took a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, he said 'After you, Miss,' before she walked slowly past him. He turned around, confused as to why she didn't enter, to her strutting her body behind him. She teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling him to follow with the hand behind her back that gently lifted her skirt just enough to flash her pair of black panties at him. He smiled, following her to her car as he realized that she was the answer to his prayers. She smirked away from his view, knowing that he had no idea about what he was getting himself into..."
Third Person LIMITED OMNISCIENCE: "He was walking to the store, beginning to think about how horny he's been, when a beautiful lady came around the corner, walking towards him. He smiled as they both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, and they took a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, he said 'After you, Miss,' before she walked slowly past him. He turned around, confused as to why she didn't enter, to her strutting her body behind him. She teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling him to follow with the hand behind her back that gently lifted her skirt just enough to flash her pair of black panties at him. He smiled, following her to her car as he realized that she was the answer to his prayers..."
KEEP IN MIND: The Protagonist in all of these is the man. Otherwise, the second person paragraph would actually be in first person for the woman.
Also, the difference between third person limited and third person unlimited is that unlimited projects the thoughts of all the characters, while limited only projects the thoughts of some of the characters (in this example of limited omniscience, I chose to only project the man's thoughts).
I THINK that that is what you were talking/asking about, but if it wasn't, oh well, now we have a short little suggestive story xD.
[quote="Inside7shadows"]By "research", I don't even Remember the choices for voices like 1st person or 3rd person omniscient.[/quote]
[u]First Person[/u]: "I was walking to the store, beginning to think about how horny I've been, when a beautiful lady came around the corner, walking towards me. I smiled as we both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, and we took a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, I said 'After you, Miss,' before she walked slowly past me. I turned around, confused as to why she didn't enter, to her strutting her body behind me. She teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling me to follow with the hand behind her back. However, that was before it gently lifted her skirt just enough to flash her pair of black panties at me. I smiled, following her to her car as I realized that she was the answer to my prayers..."
[u]Second Person[/u]: "You were walking to the store, when I walked around the corner. I had decided that you were mine from the very moment I saw your cute face and adorable haircut, but I did little to show my excitement as we both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, taking a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, you said 'After you, Miss,' before I decided to tease you by walking slowly past you. You turned around, confused as to why I didn't enter, while I just strutted my body behind you. I teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling you to follow me by using the hand behind my back. However, that was before I gently lifted my skirt just enough to give you a glance of black panties. I smirked away from your view, knowing that you had no idea about what you were getting yourself into..."
[u]Third Person UNLIMITED OMNISCIENCE[/u]: "He was walking to the store, beginning to think about how horny he's been, when a beautiful lady came around the corner, walking towards him. She had decided that he was hers from the very moment she saw his cute face and adorable haircut, but she did little to show her excitement. He smiled as they both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, and they took a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, he said 'After you, Miss,' before she walked slowly past him. He turned around, confused as to why she didn't enter, to her strutting her body behind him. She teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling him to follow with the hand behind her back that gently lifted her skirt just enough to flash her pair of black panties at him. He smiled, following her to her car as he realized that she was the answer to his prayers. She smirked away from his view, knowing that he had no idea about what he was getting himself into..."
[u]Third Person LIMITED OMNISCIENCE[/u]: "He was walking to the store, beginning to think about how horny he's been, when a beautiful lady came around the corner, walking towards him. He smiled as they both stopped in front of the door to the grocery store, and they took a moment to check each other out. Lifting the door open, he said 'After you, Miss,' before she walked slowly past him. He turned around, confused as to why she didn't enter, to her strutting her body behind him. She teasingly said 'Just checking out the view, Dear~...' while signalling him to follow with the hand behind her back that gently lifted her skirt just enough to flash her pair of black panties at him. He smiled, following her to her car as he realized that she was the answer to his prayers..."
KEEP IN MIND: The Protagonist in all of these is the man. Otherwise, the second person paragraph would actually be in first person for the woman.
Also, the difference between third person limited and third person unlimited is that unlimited projects the thoughts of all the characters, while limited only projects the thoughts of some of the characters (in this example of limited omniscience, I chose to only project the man's thoughts).
I THINK that that is what you were talking/asking about, but if it wasn't, oh well, now we have a short little suggestive story xD.